Thursday, 20 September 2012

Second Draft Scene Plan

Have you got the time please?
Have you got the time please?
Yes it 3.30pm
Exactly?
3.33pm to be precise
Thank you
Your welcome, I really like your ring
My ‘ex’ gave me it, (throws ring on the floor) that sick twisted pathetic little man.
Oh sorry I didnt mean to bring that up
He walks around like he is Gods gift to women, he smokes he drinks he cheats and lies.
I bet your really fed up, if i was you I would have killed him by now.
Imagine the long parade to the grave yard, the funeral on Tuesday the 13th of may.
Funerals are quiet with pretty flowers and Oh, what gorgeous boxes they pack them away in.
Then as we move inside the church his family are crying and wailing. what happiness this brings to me.
The grandaughter all innocent to her familys tainted past.
I’m wearing my bruises with pride, I took the blows to my face and my body and anywhere else he could get his hands on.
Then you would smile as his family take a pause of respect and you let out a small chuckle. (Lauren chuckle)
Now for the burial
They lower his box to the ground you revel in the silence that you’ve finally achieved. Oh how sweet that silence is
(Ashes to ashes. dust to dust ... etc)
How did you achieve the silence, rat poison? Smother? Knife in the back? A gunshot to the head? A slow death? Fast death? Easy death? Planned death? Drowning? Burn him disfigure his face
GRAB MATTS FACE! Eye contact for planned time
Coffee shop
Both characters sit down
Matt - 2 coffees 1 white 1 black and a small portion of strawberry cheesecake,        Hi
Lauren -Hi
Matt - Coffee?
Lauren -Please
Matt- Good, do you own a pen?
Lauren - Yes
Matt -Good (Draws on napkin)
Lauren- The Plan?
Matt - Yes
Lauren - Okay
Pinter pause
Lauren -Do you love me ?
Matt- No
Lauren -Okay
Matt- Do you love me?
Lauren -No
Matt - Okay ... but your in love?
Lauren -With the shared love
Matt -Not with each other
Lauren - No
Matt -Never
Both- Agreed
Matt- Shhhhhhhhhh (coffees are brought over) Black?
Lauren- White
Matt - Cheescake?
Lauren –No
Matt- Oh (Licks knife)
Lauren- is this your first?
Matt- No
Lauren- Are you nervous?
Matt- No
Lauren- Oh
Matt- Is this your first
Lauren – Yes
Pinter pause
Matt- Method?
Lauren – Gas
Matt- to Costly ... Method
Lauren- Knife
Matt- To messy ... Method
Lauren- Gun shot
Matt- To loud ... Method
Lauren - Burn him
Matt – Done that ... Smother?
Lauren- Yes, with a pillow. Whilst he lay there at night
Matt- invite him for dinner, say you’d like to start again
Lauren- Ill serve fish
Matt- Turkey
Lauren- Lasagne
Matt- Oysters
Lauren- Ill serve oysters
Matt- Accompanied by a nice bottle of white
Lauren – Rosé
Matt- Red ... Red wine, Candle light, Music
Lauren- Justin Bieber haha he’s next
Matt- Sweet dreams - The Eurythmics
Lauren- Slower
Matt – Celine Dion – My Heart Will Go On
Lauren- Cheesy
Matt- Etta James (At Last Plays)

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